五年级作文 2021-11-11 14:52:06
小学作文频道小编[久橙]今天给大家整理了《Winter》的优秀作文，这篇Winter共有250字，是一篇很优秀的原创作文，这篇Winter很值得大家参考和学习。
My name is Yuan Quan. I like winter best.Because l can play in the snow and make a snowman. Winter is white and pretty.My mam and sister also like winter.I often make a snowman and play in the snow on winter. Sometimes I go shopping with my family.
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My name is Yuan Quan. I like winter best. Because l can play with the snow and make a snowman. In winter, the world is all white. My mum and sister also like winter. We often make snowmen and have a snowball fight together. It is very interesting.
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五年级:袁泉
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