小学作文频道小编[﹏澈]今天给大家整理了《My famliy》的优秀作文，这篇My famliy共有250字，是一篇很优秀的原创作文，这篇My famliy很值得大家参考和学习。

I   have   a   famliy. They   are  my  father,my  mother  and  me.      My  father   is   a   doctor.  He  goes  to  work  by  bus. My  mother  is   a  factory   worker.  She  goes  to   work  by  bike.I  am   a   student.I  go  to  school  on  foot.

修改后：
I  have  a  happy famliy.  There are three people in my family. They   are  my  father, my  mother  and  me.  My  father   is   a   doctor.  He  goes  to  work  by  bus. My  mother  is   a  factory   worker.  She  goes  to   work  by  bike. I  am   a   student. I  go  to  school  on  foot. I love my family.

修改教师： Crystal老师

    六年级:静纯